"The sun gave a great shout of light and then, after several hours of thought, quietly retracted the statement"
My favorite radio show is called Welcome To Night Vale. The host of this show described the sun rising as giving a great shout of light, and then instead of saying night was coming and it was getting darker, he said the sun retracted the statement. This quote shows great imagery, which we have been talking about in class, and which I try to incorporate into all of my own writing.